so yorobeun, I like writing poems, but the thing is my family's the only people that gets to comment on it. kinda limits me, so I'm going to write one out and post . I hope you all feel what I felt when writing it. ijen nan shijak haikomida.......
UNDER THE BLUE SKY
Dreams are meant for the night,
for sleeping men losing might.
we finally found something to desire,
for it we'll pass through fire...........
Reality is like a cloudless blue sky
we crash, we fly,
we sigh and then smile,
die but still smile,
knowing our works outlived us.
Discovered dreams and unveiled wishes,
my oh my,
Are like a cloudless blue sky..............
(THE END)
How was it? let me hear criticisms and a little pointers here and there, I'm ready for it .
9 years ago
