so yorobeun, I like writing poems, but the thing is my family's the only people that gets to comment on it. kinda limits me, so I'm going to write one out and post . I hope you all feel what I felt when writing it. ijen nan shijak haikomida.......
UNDER THE BLUE SKY
Dreams are meant for the night,
for sleeping men losing might.
we finally found something to desire,
for it we'll pass through fire...........
Reality is like a cloudless blue sky
we crash, we fly,
we sigh and then smile,
die but still smile,
knowing our works outlived us.
Discovered dreams and unveiled wishes,
my oh my,
Are like a cloudless blue sky..............
(THE END)
How was it? let me hear criticisms and a little pointers here and there, I'm ready for it .

9 years ago  

Does anyone want to read some poetry when I wake up? :D

10 years ago  

Chulmoon sent me a poem/children's song. It is sort of "our" poem. Talks about walking hand in hand through an orchard with flower petals gently falling like snowflakes.
https://jreidy17.wordpress.com/2015/01/15/children-song/

10 years ago  

StayFocsd app is giving me the stink eye because I promised I would not visit mindpasta at this time ... but I miss my Mindpasta friends. So I will make this quick before the app shuts me out completely.
Yesterday, I had a Korean poem on my blog. I like when Koreans visit my blog, but am always a bit surprised. Well, one of them visited from LingQ, and he was just expecting some silly froth from this American learning Korean, and instead found a poem by his favorite poet that reminded him of the joy of his native language. It prompted this new reader to send me a poem.
What a wonderful moment that was. I like surprising Koreans. I really am interested in learning their culture, and that includes poetry

10 years ago  

11 years ago  

오늘도 누구의 이야기로 하루를 보냈다
돌아오는 길
나무들이 나를 보고 있다

11 years ago  

11 years ago  

hello guys how are you ?? who know write poetry !!!, share it with us in english or his own language show me ur talents kkkkkkk

12 years ago  

Solos,
el más simple suspiro me delataría,
sonrío tiernamente correspondiendo tu encanto.
En silencio,
mi corazón grita y se escucha hasta mis ojos.
Llevada poco a poco al delirio, disfruto cada paso al abismo.

12 years ago  

Hoy quemé tu carta. La única carta que me escribiste. Y yo te he estado escribiendo (sin que tú lo sepas) día tras día. A veces con amor, a veces con desolación, a veces con rencor. Tu carta la conozco de memoria: catorce líneas, ochenta y ocho palabras, diecinueve comas, once puntos seguidos, diecisiete acentos ortográficos y ni una sola verdad.

12 years ago  

Perdón si estoy en silencio…
no quiero verte llorar,
te estoy diciendo adiós ahora
me he preparado desde el principio.
No pienses que mi corazón es frío,
pero tu calor nunca fue suficiente…
no importaba cuan fuerte me aferrara a ti
mi pecho se sentía vacío.
Lo diré ahora antes de que se escape
imitando tus suspiros.
(ando inspirada, no me juzguen )

12 years ago